Today, the writing community on Threads was full of discussion about the proper punctuation marks for action tags. After reading through some of the comments, I decided to write a quick post about the difference between dialogue tags and action tags. There seems to be a lot of confusion about this!
As I’ve discussed elsewhere, I’m a big fan of using action beats/action tags rather than direct dialogue tags. With action tags, it’s possible to indicate which character is saying something without having to use “said” all the time. See the snippet below:
Linton raised his eyebrows. “Do you know how to use that?”
“Yes. I’ll cover you.” I aimed the pistol at the cottage door.
It’s clear in context that Linton delivers the first line, and the narrator delivers the second line. It isn’t necessary to add “said Linton” or “I said.”
But if you want to use action tags, you should be aware that the rules for punctuating action tags are different from the rules for punctuating dialogue tags. Whereas dialogue tags can be separated from the dialogue with a comma, action tags cannot.
Example A is a traditional dialogue tag using “said.”
“You need to do your homework, mister,” she said, and scowled at him. ✅
Example B is an action tag, using “scowled” as the verb rather than said.
“You need to do your homework, mister.” She scowled at him.✅
Either of those options are considered acceptable punctuation.
What’s not acceptable (at least according to traditional rules) is punctuating the action tag as if it were a dialogue tag. Example C contains a punctuation error.
Example C: “You need to you do your homework, mister,” she scowled at him. ❌
Why is Example C wrong? Because, as a verb, “scowl” means making a specific facial expression. It isn’t a speech act. A scowl doesn’t produce a sound, so you can’t “scowl a word.” It is an action tag, not a dialogue tag, and it needs to be punctuated as such.
Sometimes people disagree about whether a word like “laughed” or “growled” can be used as the verb in a dialogue tag. As a general rule, only words that refer to producing speech (yell, whisper, announce, shout, etc.) can be dialogue tags.
“I love punctuation,” he said.✅
“I love punctuation,” he whispered. ✅
“I love punctation,” he shouted. ✅
“I love punctuation,” he smiled.❌
Strictly speaking, you can’t “smile” a word. You can smile while talking, but the smile only accompanies the words. The smile does not produce the words. That’s why “smile” is not traditionally considered an acceptable verb for dialogue tags. Yes, some writers are comfortable using words like “smile” or “laugh” as dialogue tags, but if you choose to do that, you should do so knowing that grammar sticklers won’t like it.
For a more thorough discussion of using tags with dialogue, see Kristen Hamilton’s “5 Essential Rules of Writing Powerful Dialogue.”